Monday, January 09, 2006

Class Notes

How long can I hold your breath? Misplaced drawings on the side of my page reveal more than the irrational words scrawled, line after fallen line; Symmetrical and A. unexpected flowers blossom around each binder hole, coiled on this fragmented paper of mine. And, in the margins written over and over rubbed out over and over: Your name touches the tips of my fingers.

6 comments:

Nauman said...

One of your best poems ever, Asmaa. This one is oozing with emotion with a smooth flow to it... mashallah.

Bushra said...

Stop writing my name everywhere! =P

Really nice poem.

Stylus Virus said...

assalamu aleikum

my dear friend, how careless other strings of words seem compared to the loveliness in you.

>hug<

Squeeky said...

Assalaamu Alaikum :)

wow *applause*

Eid Mubarak!

Asmaa said...

Nauman, thanks. Approval from you, of all people, is nice.

Ahy, I already told you that I won't tell. Don't press your luck.

Bushra, yes, the secret is out :O

Sheikh, walaikum assalaam. I love your comments, they make me smile and feel warm and fuzzy. How careless other strings of words seem compared to the loveliness in YOU. hug X 2 :)

Squeeky, Bro, Eid Mubarak to you guys! (and everyone else too).

Umar said...

eid mubarak